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1928 Okeechobee Hurricane

My fellow writers at Wikipedia:WikiProject Tropical cyclones have agreed this is a good article, and suggested that it be put up for peer review before a possible featured article candidacy. I consider it to be extremely complete for an event this long ago, but I'd appreciate any feedback, particularly on issues I might not have noticed. Jdorje 03:04, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

• Lead could be improved and increased in length slightly. AndyZ 23:01, 23 January 2006 (UTC)

• • Done. Jdorje 00:05, 24 January 2006 (UTC)