Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Crown Jewels of the United Kingdom/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Graham Beards via FACBot (talk) 11:34, 4 January 2016 [1].

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Crown Jewels of the United Kingdom

Nominator(s): Firebrace (talk) 01:44, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

I took this on as a project in early December as I felt the article was very neglected for such an important piece of English history and a tourist attraction visited by 3 million people a year. Many hours were spent verifying the extant citations, adding 23 new ones, and generally bringing the article up to a more acceptable standard. Hopefully featured article? Firebrace (talk) 01:44, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Oppose: Important article, yes; ready for FAC – not yet, I'm afraid. Despite the obvious work and improvements, there are uncited statements in almost every section, whole paragraphs sometimes lacking references. The lead section does not comply with WP:LEAD. The well-known episode of Captain Blood's attempted theft is covered in a single uncited sentence: "In 1671, Colonel Thomas Blood attempted to steal the Crown Jewels." The article has never been subject to any review processes, and needs considerably more attention before it is ready for FAC. Suggest withdrawal, much further work, and peer review. The involvement of a co-editor with more experience of the FAC process might be an advantage. Brianboulton (talk) 10:36, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

• Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Graham Beards (talk) 11:34, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

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