User talk:Tsparbanie
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Article evaluation: Rating: C
Lead section: somewhat short; interchanges migration with expansion; “environmental suppression” is listed as something which controls forest migration, but is not described
Clear Structure/imbalanced sections: structure is provided, but a lot of information is seemingly out of place—for example entire paragraphs about current climate change and its effects are in a section called “Retention of low-density founder populations”—this also makes a less important aspect of the topic seem way more important than it is
Sourcing/gaps in sourcing: only one source in the lead section, that same one source in section 1 and 2 (only cited once in each section); no citations for paragraphs describing the current state of knowledge of forest migration in the context of climate change Tsparbanie (talk) 02:35, 24 October 2019 (UTC)tsparbanie ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hello, Tsparbanie, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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