User talk:Sophieb905

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Hello, Sophieb905, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:45, 27 March 2019 (UTC)

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Hi! I have some feedback for you:

• Avoid scare quotes, even if they weren't intended as such.
• I tweaked one part in Frug's section to make it more clear that it was her.
• This sentence feels a little bit like an incomplete sentence - maybe merge it with the prior one? " Although they believe more importantly, that through abandoning the values of Enlightenment thought, postmodern feminism "precludes the possibility of liberating political action.""
• The sourcing is good, but if you could find a bit more that would be awesome.

Overall I think you have a strong start here, so keep up the good work! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:04, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

Postmodern feminism

Sophie, good job tightening up the section on Frug in this edit at Postmodern feminism. Not sure what your assignment covers, but if you need more stuff to do and enjoy editing down sections to make sure they stick to cited material only, and improving flow, like you did there, there's more fat in that article that could stand that kind of treatment. Good luck in your class, Mathglot (talk) 09:57, 28 April 2019 (UTC)