User talk:O22ZY

The LDS Church article

Hello, thank you for contributing to this article. However, when you place a tag on an article as you did today, you have to be more explicit in your explanation of the tag on the dicussion page. Your comment on the discussion page simply restated the tag, but you did not give specific problems so that other editors could assist you in improving the article. For example, your allegation that the article is written to make Mormons only sound like Christians needs to be followed up with specific examples/quotes from the article that are false and support your allegation. Without those examples, other editors don't know how to correct the article. Does this make sense? I will look here on your discussion page if you want further explanation and I look forward to more contributions from you to improve Wikipedia. Cheers. --Storm Rider ^(talk) 20:44, 2 November 2007 (UTC)