User talk:Jkrzysik

Welcome to Wikipedia. I have created your User talk page. Wesclark80 (talk) 20:36, 29 January 2016 (UTC)

Dover Corporation rewrite

I've reviewed the rewrite suggestion and moved it to the article space after changes. The draft that you had written almost completely replaced the existing article. I removed some tone and statements that were violation of guidelines and policies on neutral point of view. I made many changes in style according to our Manual of Stye. I also left a few maintenance tags. Importantly, even if the article is factually accurate, parts of it are based on sources produced by the company itself. We prefer third party sources for verification of information, because they do not have an inherent conflict of interest in reporting. Some minor issues remain; you are free to discuss them on the article talk page. Thank you for your contributions! – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 19:02, 3 March 2016 (UTC)