User talk:Fi89419

Hello, Fi89419! I see you don't have anything on your talk page yet, so I figured I would drop in to say hi. Nboffa (talk) 05:12, 14 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings[edit]

I look forward to seeing your 3-5 articles ideas, as well as a link to your critical evaluation of an existing Wikipedia article related to the class with suggestions for improving it on the article's discussion page. You can post those under this comment (make sure to add a semicolon to indent your comment to the right). Once you have posted these, please be sure to let me know on my talk page in the section I set up for these two assignments.--Theredproject (talk) 21:00, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

review on Lupton article[edit]

I am not sure if that quote from Lupton is necessary in 'early career' section. It could be probably paraphrased and taken out of her words. --Nboffa (talk) 02:07, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I began to change some of the voice, such as 'we' within the article. Try to fix the rest and to follow a more neutral voice for Wikipedia. Overall the content and structure are� good but move away from any unnecessary quotes. If you need further help on anything, just shoot me a message. --Nboffa (talk) 02:28, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the advice, it is beyond appreciated! --Fi89419 (talk) 02:34, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]