User talk:Eespino1
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Rhetorical Analysis[edit]
Strengths and Weaknesses: Strengths: A lot of sources, Unbiased, Topics are missing, Talk page is fine Weaknesses: Short lead, Source quality is lacking (social media, sources not found), Small grammar issues View history: The article was started on June 19, 2016. The writing sounds a little dated. Instead of saying “Her parents are..” it says, “Hill was born to parents…” There are a few details missing, but otherwise most of the information is the same. The editors seem to be pretty repetitive and consistent. Besides my edits, the most recent edit was made on March 2, 2017. This proves that the page is still active, but there is still a lot more work to be done.
Brainstorming[edit]
1.Lele Pons 2.Oriville Redenbacher 3.milk and honey 4.White L and Black Butterfly (Baltimore) 5.Athena Society 6.Alex Trochut 7.Marina City band 8.Warped Tour 9.Beauty Blender 10.Ella Minnow Pea 11.Jaclyn Hill 12.Lincoln-Way High School District 210 13. Smallpools 14. Daith piercing 15. Dowling House in Galena IL
I think the White L and Black Butterfly are notable because they are ever-present segregation patterns within Baltimore's city grid. I think many activists, newspapers and researchers studying hyper segregated cities will have a lot of information relating to this topic. I will find these sources online. Sub topics to help research include: apartheid rules, contract system, and ghettoization.