User talk:Cbshier
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Hello, Cbshier, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 06:14, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review - Jeremy Brown[edit]
Your additions to the Eugenics in the United States page were incredibly strong. You used a variety of trusted, reliable Government sources, all of which were paraphrased nicely so as not to be seen a plagiarism. The section which you added, on Compulsory Sterilization Prevention used a number of hyperlinks that may effectively drive more Wikipedia Traffic to the Eugenics in the United States page.
Suggestions for possible improvement would be to think about a possible change in the section title you created. It is very similar to that of another section titled, "Compulsory Sterilization". It's possible these sections could be combined or renamed so as not to confuse the reader. Also, the section titled "21st Century" is very thin, and could use some more information to be truly useful to the reader.
Overall, you did a great job and your additions to the page were very helpful. Bjeremy (talk) 17:28, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review - Nicholas Moore[edit]
Great job making sure that all of the titles of the sections were properly capitalized, linking key words in your contribution to their respective wiki pages, and making sure that your contribution sounds encyclopedic. All of your sources appear to be credible as well. Although it was not part of your contribution, consider taking a look at the 21st Century section and try to develop it a bit more - are there other things that people consider contemporary eugenics?
Nick M-PS489 (talk) 19:42, 9 March 2017 (UTC)