User:JaySShieh
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| This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/UW_Bothell/B_WRIT_135_Research_Writing_(Fall_2017). Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article. |
What I would add to this page is to give explanation of some energy mentioned.
Second I would go more in depth about the section secondary energy.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primary_energyJaySShieh (talk) 03:01, 24 October 2017 (UTC)Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).
first add more information about water heating
second include more architecture and urban planning
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_energyJaySShieh (talk) 03:01, 24 October 2017 (UTC)Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).
I would add more information about the obstacles section. Second I would break down the introduction so the reader would be more informed about what this is article is about.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/100%25_renewable_energyJaySShieh (talk) 03:01, 24 October 2017 (UTC)Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).