Template:Did you know nominations/Stuart Memorial, Dunedin

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The result was: promoted by Rjjiii talk 03:38, 7 February 2024 (UTC)

Stuart Memorial, Dunedin

Created by Generalissima (talk). Self-nominated at 21:12, 9 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Stuart Memorial, Dunedin; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • Beginning review DrThneed (talk) 21:30, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article was moved to mainspace 9 Jan, so is new enough, and long enough. Not sure I've ever seen an Earwig score of zero, good work! I have no concerns about the article, and it's nice to see heritage objects in Dunedin getting some love. My only comment might be calling Stuart a preacher in the hook, which is a word that isn't used in the article (nor in most of the sources I've looked at). Would clergyman be better? Not least because while he would of course have preached sermons at Knox church, those aren't what he was so well regarded for. DrThneed (talk) 22:14, 13 January 2024 (UTC)

  • Oh yeah, that's a fair point. Edited hook to include this. Generalissima (talk) 22:53, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
Do you think the edited hook works @DrThneed:? BuySomeApples (talk) 02:17, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
Sorry, I should have said to ping me. Yes, the edited hook is good for me, editing status to match, good to go. DrThneed (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2024 (UTC)