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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:18, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

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Soetran

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Created by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Self-nominated at 16:39, 13 December 2020 (UTC).

  • I'll review this nom shortly. Tomobe03 (talk) 13:17, 19 December 2020 (UTC)


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I would suggest a general copyedit of the prose before the article makes it to the main page. Even though this is not a DYK criterion, the article would benefit from a quick once-over. Tomobe03 (talk) 10:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

Comments
  • No images used in the hook - so that segment is moot
  • QPQ met - reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Mayoralty of Bernie Sanders
@Tomobe03: Sorry, I think I need to clarify this: Wikiy is a mirror of Wikipedia. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 10:44, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
Ok, I'll check that. Cheers Tomobe03 (talk) 10:48, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
I did not find the site in the list of mirrors here, but let me check some more.Tomobe03 (talk) 13:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
  • comment: Earwig's copyvio detector flagged this article [1] as a suspected copyvio, but this appears to be a mirror. I have confirmed this with User:Diannaa and they will flag the mirror as such appropriately to avoid future confusion. Tomobe03 (talk) 14:47, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
  • comment: The phrase "Clove Governor" is found in the offered source as "gubernur Cengkeh" (p.28), AGF on foreign-language source

Regardless of the above, could you please check these sentences in Military career section:

  • Less than a year, in 1963, he was transferred to... - is this meant to be "Less than a year later..."?
  • In 1967, he was reassigned to East Java, promoted to Mayor, ... - did you mean Major? Tomobe03 (talk) 14:24, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

I am satisfied that the DYK criteria are met. Tomobe03 (talk) 17:11, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

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