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Shushu/Tong

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... that Shushu/Tong is a brand that creates fashion collections inspired by magical girl anime like Puella Magi Madoka Magica?

Source: https://www.scmp.com/magazines/style/luxury/article/3209615/inside-shushu/tongs-sweet-fashion-bomb-founders-liushu-lei-and-yutong-jiang-shanghai-based-brand https://metalmagazine.eu/en/post/shushu-slash-tong-feminine-style-with-a-twist

ALT1: ... that Chinese fashion brand Shushu/Tong made their first sales on WeChat? Source: https://www.elle.com/fashion/a46266368/shushu-tong-spring-2024-interview/
Reviewed:

Created by Luiysia (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Luiysia (talk) 17:20, 10 May 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article is well-written and well-sourced. Just two small recommendations: I think Puella Magi Madoka Magica and Cardcaptor Sakura can be mentioned in the hook to make it more interesting, but that's up to you. If you want to retain the current hook, then I think the term "magical girl anime" should be linked. Also, I noticed that Paper Mag was linked in one of the sources, but the other websites in the sources were left in black. It may be worth considering consistency by either linking all the websites or not linking them at all. Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 11:08, 14 May 2024 (UTC)

@Prince of Erebor: Hi, thanks for review. I'm not sure what you mean by "left in black," could you clarify?

Here's another possible hook: ... that Shushu/Tong is a brand that creates fashion collections inspired by magical girl anime like Puella Magi Madoka Magica? Luiysia (talk) 18:08, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that Shushu/Tong is a brand that creates fashion collections inspired by magical girl anime like Puella Magi Madoka Magica?

@Luiysia: I think the new hook looks good! Also, my apologies for the confusion. What I meant is that you have only added a link to Paper Mag in the citation templates, but didn't link to the other magazines or websites. Therefore, I would suggest either linking all of the websites of the sources, or not linking them at all, to maintain consistency.—Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 06:15, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Hey @Luiysia:, I don't want to keep this review pending for so long, so I have added the links to the respective publishers of the sources and updated the hook on your behalf. But please be aware of the consistency of the citation format next time when you edit. Cheers! —Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 13:04, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for helping out, I haven't had time to check my Wikipedia page lately. I've added the other source. Luiysia (talk) 17:30, 28 May 2024 (UTC)