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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 17:12, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Shmuel HaNavi Street, Shmuel HaNavi (neighborhood)[edit]

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  • ... that apartments in Jerusalem's Shmuel HaNavi neighborhood, near the street of the same name, have triple-thick concrete walls, roofs with gunner positions, and courtyards for mass troop call-ups?

Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 01:11, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Shmuel HaNavi Street
  • is new enough and long enough. All images have appropriate copyright tags. Plagiarism spot check here, here show no cause for concerns.
  • Warning: Israel is not my strongpoint. I may not be able to adequately pick up on all the POV issues (especially ones that may be subject to ArbCom sanctions). The article reads as neutral enough to me, but some one else may want to check. Offline sources were not plagiarised and support text.
  • One fact tag needing clearing. --LauraHale (talk) 01:38, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
Shmuel HaNavi (neighborhood)
  • All images have appropriate copyright tags. Article is completely supported by inline citations. Plagiarism spot check here, here give no cause for concern.
  • Warning: Israel is not my strongpoint. I may not be able to adequately pick up on all the POV issues (especially ones that may be subject to ArbCom sanctions). The article reads as neutral enough to me, but some one else may want to check. Offline sources were not plagiarised and support text.
  • Pre-expansion size: Prose size (text only): 806 B (148 words) "readable prose size". Post expansion size: Prose size (text only): 3797 B (584 words) "readable prose size". 156 words short. --LauraHale (talk) 01:38, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
Hook
  • Properly formatted. QPQ done. Hook is supported with inline citations in article. (Referred to as "tenement buildings" in the article.) I think this is neutral enough and interesting. --LauraHale (talk) 01:38, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Lengthen one article. Fix fact tag. --LauraHale (talk) 01:38, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

  • Hi LauraHale, thanks for the review. I fixed the fact tag on Shmuel HaNavi Street. Re Shmuel HaNavi (neighborhood), after I put it up, another editor wanted to reinstate some of the information I deleted, and I went ahead and streamlined the presentation. Between this edit on 20 March, before I started the expansion, at 815 characters, and this edit at over 6000 characters, I think it satisfies the 5x expansion. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 15:13, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
Good to go. Problems fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 22:06, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
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