Template:Did you know nominations/Raymond A. Thomas

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 08:02, 2 October 2014 (UTC)

Raymond A. Thomas

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• ... that every year between 2001 and 2013 Lieutenant General Raymond A. Thomas (pictured), commander of Joint Special Operations Command, deployed to Afghanistan, except 2007 when he was deployed to Iraq?

Created by Dainomite (talk). Self nominated at 20:27, 4 September 2014 (UTC).

• ALT1: ... that Lieutenant General Raymond A. Thomas (pictured) deployed to Afghanistan every year between 2001 and 2013, except 2007, when he was deployed to Iraq?
• ALT2: ... that Joint Special Operations Command's current commander, Lieutenant General Raymond A. Thomas (pictured), deployed to Afghanistan every year between 2001 and 2013, except 2007 when he was deployed to Iraq?

• New enough (4 September), long enough (2,159 characters), fully referenced. Hook and ALTs all fine, verified against online source. (Corrected the grammar, because 2007 is a "when", not a "where".) Nice image, appropriately licenced. Has four prior noms, so no QPQ required (this time). Good to go! Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:52, 10 September 2014 (UTC)

• I keep coming across this as I prepare prep sets, and I honestly don't see what's hooky about any of the hooks. Yoninah (talk) 22:46, 29 September 2014 (UTC)

• I find the fact that he was deployed every year for over a decade very interesting. I assumed other people would think it would be interesting too. —  dainomite   01:22, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

• If other people find this hooky, then I would suggest making it read much simpler, like:
• ALT3: ... that Lieutenant General Raymond A. Thomas (pictured) was deployed to Afghanistan for part of every year for over a decade, except for one year when he was sent to Iraq? Yoninah (talk) 12:16, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

• That works for me, and sounds more hooky. —  dainomite   04:40, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

• Reviewer needed for ALT3. Yoninah (talk) 19:17, 1 October 2014 (UTC)
  • I thought it was mind blowing. Thirteen tours of Iraq and Afghanistan? The strain would be incredible. Hook verified against online source. Tweaked grammar slightly. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:57, 1 October 2014 (UTC)