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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:20, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

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Ilse Hess[edit]

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  • ... that Ilse Hess, who was one of the first woman to study at the University of Munich, remained a committed National Socialist after World War II? Ernst Klee: Das Kulturlexikon zum Dritten Reich. Wer war was vor und nach 1945. S. Fischer, Frankfurt am Main 2007, S. 239.
    • ALT1: ... that Ilse Hess was the first woman to study at the University of Munich? Ernst Klee: Das Kulturlexikon zum Dritten Reich. Wer war was vor und nach 1945. S. Fischer, Frankfurt am Main 2007, S. 239.

Created/expanded by Bellerophon5685 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:05, 30 March 2017 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough, and long enough. It is neutrally written. No copyvio issues that I can find. AGF on offline German source. ALT1 is not supported by the text, though, and the version in the text is less interesting, so I have struck it. I would suggest adding the fact into the original hook, which is quite short. Other minor issues: I think the hook should link to the Nazi Party and World War II, and there is this sentence in the article, which is really difficult to understand: "After 11 May 1941 (the day of departure from Rudolf Hess over Scotland), Ilse Hess left Munich with her son Wolf Rüdiger to go to Hindelang." No QPQ appears to be needed, as this user has 3 credits. Vanamonde (talk) 07:43, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
  • Bellerophon, the article says "one of the first"; the hook cannot say "the first". Vanamonde (talk) 04:48, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
  • GTG, AGF on offline/German sources. Vanamonde (talk) 08:14, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
  • GTG is Good to Go, but, uh, what is AGF?
  • GTG is Goot to go: AGF is "Assume Good Faith", or "Assuming Good Faith." In this context, it means I cannot access/cannot understand the source in question, but I am assuming good faith that you have used it appropriately. :) Vanamonde (talk) 17:31, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but do not see an inline citation (immediately after the sentence in which the hook fact appears) for either hook fact, per WP:DYK#Eligibility criteria 3. Cited hook. Yoninah (talk) 22:43, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
  • @Bellerophon5685: please adjust the article, not this nomination template. Put the cites right after the sentence in which the hook facts appear. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 10:39, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

One thing I am sorry that this article is lacking is a picture. I cannot find any PD photos of her. Can anybody else?

This is a good one, but I don't know if it can be uploaded.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/04/63/3c/04633cc91b26ac67d37696c9623ba2af.jpg

  • Thank you for adding the inline cites. Restoring tick per Vanamonde's review. Yoninah (talk) 18:18, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
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