Template:Did you know nominations/Fürchte dich nicht, BWV 228

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The result was: promoted by sovereign°sentinel (contribs) 06:55, 5 September 2015 (UTC)

Fürchte dich nicht, BWV 228[edit]

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... that the text of Bach motet for double choir [[[Fürchte dich nicht, BWV 228|Fürchte dich nicht, BWV 228]]] Error: {{Lang}}: text has italic markup (help), for a funeral contains two verses by Isaiah, both beginning with "Do not fear"?

Reviewed: Cleveland Centennial half dollar

5x expanded by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 07:12, 29 August 2015 (UTC).

I'd suggest a more grammatically correct and easier-to-read version of the hook, viz.:

ALT1: ... that the text of Bach's [[[Fürchte dich nicht, BWV 228|Fürchte dich nicht, BWV 228]]] Error: {{Lang}}: text has italic markup (help), a motet for a double choir composed for a funeral, contains two verses by Isaiah that both begin with "Do not fear"?

The article otherwise looks fine to me. It's new enough, long enough and reliably sourced. The hook is satisfactorily sourced as well. Prioryman (talk) 21:30, 4 September 2015 (UTC)