Template:Did you know nominations/Edith Kawelohea McKinzie
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:27, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
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Edith Kawelohea McKinzie[edit]
... that Edith Kawelohea McKinzie documented the genealogy of the chiefs of Kahoolawe, indexed early 19th-century Hawaiian-language newspapers, and in 2004 was named a Living Treasure of Hawai'i for her contributions to Hawaiian culture?
Created by Alanna the Brave (talk). Self-nominated at 23:17, 16 August 2017 (UTC).
- Comment: Alanna the Brave, the hook is far too long at 233 prose characters including spaces—the max at DYK is 200 characters. Please propose an ALT1 hook that is within the limit. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:12, 19 August 2017 (UTC)
- BlueMoonset: Apologies! I missed seeing the DYK character limit. Here is an alternate hook below. Alanna the Brave (talk) 22:34, 19 August 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that Edith Kawelohea McKinzie was named a Living Treasure of Hawai'i after indexing early 19th-century Hawaiian-language newspapers and documenting the genealogy of the chiefs of Kahoolawe?
New article, nominated in time, long enough, sourced, neutral, hook checks out. No QPQ needed as a second nomination. --Usernameunique (talk) 03:00, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
