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Date	Process	Result
April 10, 2007	Good article nominee	Listed
January 30, 2009	Good article reassessment	Kept
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 23, 2007. The text of the entry was: Did you know ...that Yoshiaki Yamashita, a pioneer of judo in the United States, was the first person to have been awarded 10-dan* grading in Kodokan judo?*
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Fixing Title[edit]

How do I fix the title, which should read Yoshiaki Yamashita? Joseph Svinth 07:27, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

If Yamashita is his family name, then the article title should be "Yamashita Yoshiaki", per WP:MOS-JP (because he was born prior to the first year of Meiji, 1868). Bradford44 14:41, 23 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

When it was uploaded, the title was solely "Yamashita"... Joseph Svinth 23:44, 25 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article nomination[edit]

Comment The page should be moved to "Yamashita Yoshiaki", per WP:MOS-JP#Names. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Bradford44 (talk • contribs) 17:07, 4 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]

GA Review[edit]

Wow! Quite an interesting article! Very good prose, I particularly like the japanese characters provided with translations. I think this article meets the good article criteria. While the article is very well referenced (and with primarily non-internet citations, too), editors should probably review WP:CITE for tips on formatting the references a bit better. There are a few websites in the citations, and these should be formatted a bit differently (see the example I provided for the last one (which I also added a cite to the 10th dan posthumous bit). Other than that, I think more info could probably be added to the 'later life' section; the two quotes seem to dominate that section quite a bit, so perhaps some non-quote prose could help that out more. But these are minor glitches, which should definitely be fixed prior to WP:FAC, but IMHO, not worth holding up GA status. Good work! Dr. Cash 18:05, 10 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Reassessment[edit]

This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Yamashita Yoshiaki/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.

This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article is very good, currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards,--Jackyd101 (talk) 08:49, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):

The prose is pretty good, 7/10.

The lead is too short and doesn't properly introduce the article. Please expand it into at least one full sentence.

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

References should come after punctuation, not in the middle of sentences.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
It is stable.
It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
Overall:
a Pass/Fail: