Talk:Wide Awake in Europe/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:05, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• "A limited number of EPs were produced" it would be better if we knew how many, as quite obviously it would have been impossible to produce an unlimited number.
  •  Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
• "Among the three tracks is "Mercy""... I imagine for a couple of extra words, you could add the names of the other two tracks!
  •  Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
• You have USEng (organizers) but BritEng dates (26 November 2010). Be consistent.
  •  Done Changed to USEng dates. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
• "on 26 November 2010 (Black Friday)" I don't think you need to reiterate Black Friday yet again.
  •  Done Removed this part. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
• " Because only 5000 copies were created, the availability to record stores was limited" again, it seems like stating the obvious here, but I know what you're trying to say.... can we re-phrase a bit?
  •  Done Removed this part. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
• Don't think you need to link roulette.
  •  Done Removed. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
• Any reason why Dublin and Brussels are linked and Paris isn't?
  •  Done Linked paris. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

A few minor issues, I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)