Talk:What's Your Name (Usher song)/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: — Legolas ^(talk2me) 07:03, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Infobox

• Compacy disc single can be abbreviated to CD single in the piping.
• One thing I always tell every one is not to elongate the infobox. This cn be achieved by removing the breaks from the recording studio names, just a comma will do
• Writer names, aren't you following BMI credits?

• There is no guideline about using writers' legal or stage names. I prefer to use stage names for consisitency and clarity. Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• Written by Usher, will.i.am and Toby Gad and produced by will.i.am --> Written by Usher, Toby Gad and will.i.am while produced by the latter,...
• later released via compact disc single and download. --> later released as a compact disc single and also as digital download.
• electo --> ty6po
• Australian ARIA Singles Chart --> You know what the expansion will sound like don't you? "Australian Australin Recording..." The charts name is ARIA Singles Top 75, although Australian Singles Chart will do.

Bkgnd

• The tune was recorded by --> The tune? Either some clarification or I think you meant the song
• A compact disc single was released in Australia and New Zealand on 13 September 2008 --> Date format consistency
  • There's always trouble when writing in a foreign language... :P Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
• Try to archive all the links for the Sony Ericcson, the CD single outlets etc.

Composition

• Sheet music wasn't there?
  • Nah, the only song with sheet music from HIS was LITC. Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
• Greg Kot of the Chicago Tribune compared the song's synth riff to 1980s' MTV --> This is actually a wrong comparison from what I'm reading. "Greg Kot of the Chicago Tribune compared the song's synth riff to the song's that were popular during the 1980s' MTV generation." This is what Kot meant.
• Bachelor history needs a little expansion I feel

Reception

• Again the ARIA thing

References

• Allmusic publisher is Rovi Corporation.
  • This uses {{Allmusic}}, there is currently a discussion to add a Rovi link to the template
• The Washington Post is a SPS, doesnot need publisher.

Now scram and correctify! — Legolas ^(talk2me) 08:08, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Everything that I haven't commented under is done, others are addressed, I believe. Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine, looks like another 30 points for ya! — Legolas ^(talk2me) 09:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)