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Grammar and usage, introduction[edit]

Please correct the grammar and usage of this section:

"In low gravity environments such as a space station, a common liquid separator will not function because gravity is not usable as a separation mechanism. In this case, centrifugal force needs to be utilized in a spin"

1. Gravity is not a separation mechanism. It should say "because gravity is not usable as a driving force for a separator."

2. Centrifugal force has no needs. So we should not say that "centrifugal force needs this or that." There could be other technologies as well, so the last sentence would begin better as, "In this case, gravity is used in a spin..." Remember, KISS.

Ziaddel (talk) 17:43, 5 September 2014 (UTC) zeaddel 5IX2014[reply]