Talk:TheraBreath (brand)

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Full Disclosure[edit]

Hello all -- I'm a paid employee of TheraBreath looking to clean up and update our Wikipedia page (there's some outdated information here).

In the interests of following the spirit of Wikipedia and the letter of their terms of service, I'm fully disclosing my affiliation here and will be requesting edits, rather than making them myself.

UnderWoodFive (talk) 17:31, 7 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction Change[edit]

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

The introduction includes the phrase: "It treats issues related to halitosis and is also known under the name “TetroBreath” in Europe and “The Breath Company” in the United Kingdom."

We (TheraBreath) no longer market ourselves as "TetroBreath" in Europe, so that should be removed. Perhaps: "It treats issues related to halitosis and is marketed under the name "The Breath Co." in the United Kingdom." — Preceding unsigned comment added by UnderWoodFive (talk • contribs) 17:36, 7 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 8-AUG-2018[edit]

Obsolete product label omitted

Additional elements within the article were summarized, per WP:SS. Regards, spintendo 17:16, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]