Talk:Tajikistan at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 12:45, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do these five over the next 24-48 hours. Courcelles (talk) 12:45, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"He was accompanied by chairman of" by the chairman
Could use a comma after the chairman's name, I think.
"handed a quota space" makes it sound like it was a gift, not something he had earned.
How many total runners in the 100m race?

That's all from me. Courcelles (talk) 12:53, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Have done all of the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:37, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- very good, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 13:40, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]