Talk:Ski jumping at the 1928 Winter Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 22:21, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- I will be conducting a full review shortly. There only appear to be a few minor corrections needed, which I will see to myself today or tomorrow. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 22:21, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- Could you possibly:
- Clarify in the lead the word "proponent" - is this of the speed increase?
- Either explain or link "inrun"
- Consistently spell that "inrun" or "in-run"
- Correct "the organizers the Canadian team" to something grammatical
- That is all, though - it's very close to GA status. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 22:39, 18 December 2011 (UTC)