Talk:Paul A. Zahl

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This article is too closely worded like the Washington Post obituary[edit]

This article too closely follows the Washington Post obituary. It is in severe need of incorporating more sources, and improving the tone. A first step would be moving from saying he found the albino gorilla in "africa" to saying what country he actually found it in.John Pack Lambert (talk) 14:57, 25 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]