Talk:Mylord Carthago (show jumping horse)

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Eval of this OKA-paid article[edit]

This article by a paid translator is NOT ready for mainspace. This article was created just one week ago, and yet 75% (27 of 36) of the citations fail, which tells me they weren't even checked, and that the creating editor only translated from French Wikipedia. Creating an article in Wikipedia does not simply involve copying (translating) it from somewhere else, but also requires citations to verify the content. This article fails in that regard. This article also overlinks basic words and has numerous duplicate links, an issue I have found common in OKA articles.

These are the citations that did not link to actual sources: 1, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 15, 17, 18, 19, 21, 22, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 34, 35.

I am sending this article to draftspace so these issues can be corrected. Once corrected, I recommend submitting it for review, rather than simply moving it back to mainspace.

▶ I am Grorp ◀ 01:28, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Unused item from Bibliography[edit]

Leprevost, Pénélope; Coupérie-Eiffel, Virginie (2013). Destinée cavalière (in French). Lavauzelle. ISBN 978-2-7025-1568-6.

This source was not called from within the article. Leaving it here. ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 05:14, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Breed[edit]

You might want to explain how a half-Holsteiner is somehow a Selle Français. ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 23:08, 7 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Mylord Carthago is descended from Carthago (a Holstainer) and Fragance de Chalus (a Selle Francais). However, he is registered in stud books as a Selle Francais (here below I share some links for you to review). You might confused Carthago, Mylord Carthago and Carthago Z, they are three different named horses.

https://www.hippomundo.com/en/pedigree/performance/45828-mylord-carthago

https://www.horsetelex.com/horses/pedigree/102258/mylord-carthago

Shellypls (talk) 13:01, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]