Talk:Move Like This/GA1
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Reviewer: Mattg82 (talk · contribs) 02:37, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- 1b) The lead is rather short, it should be expanded. The iTunes edition track listing should ideally be in the same track listing format as the Best Buy edition.
- 2b) Minor issue: ref 17 has not details, publisher, accessdate etc
- 3a/b) A few things a missing from this article. It could do with a chart table. Release history? was the album released in other countries? Any additional personnel, producers, engineers etc? Maybe include a bit more about the tour? Include a music sample perhaps?
Fixes so far:
- Audio sample added
- iTunes tracklist formatting made consistent with other tracklists
- Ref 17 filled out
- Tour section expanded
- Production & engineering information added
I'll tackle the rest tomorrow. 28bytes (talk) 21:47, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- I have expanded the lead a bit and added a chart section. There doesn't appear to be anything to add regarding the release date(s): it was released worldwide in CD and digital download formats on May 10, 2011, and I can't find any sources that discuss any other release dates. I think that addresses your comments; please let me know if I have missed anything. 28bytes (talk) 18:48, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
- OK looking good. One final nick-pick, I would remove the section headers from Album and Singles, then replace it with a semi-colon. ===Albums=== to ;Albums ===Singles=== to ;Singles This will still make them bold headers but it will remove the out of place edit tag.
Passing article, nice work. Mattg82 (talk) 22:43, 26 February 2012 (UTC)