Talk:Moses Malone/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:06, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
Going to read through this article and will leave comments soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:06, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead[edit]
Early life[edit]
- "Mary kicked her husband out due to his alcohol use." - kicked out is informal
Utah Stars[edit]
- Wikilink 1974–75 season to 1974–75 ABA season
Spirits of St. Louis[edit]
- Link 1975–76 season to 1975–76 ABA season
Buffalo Braves[edit]
- "had also acquired power forward Maurice Lucas in the draft and believed they had acquired two players" - reptition of acquired
Houston Rockets[edit]
- "The following season in 1980–81 season," - reword to In the following 1980–81 season,
- Be consitent in how career high is written as either hypenated or not
- "Days later on February 11 against the Seattle SuperSonics, " - Nine days later,
Philadelphia 76ers[edit]
- The New York Times should be italized since it is a printed publication
- "As it turned out" - transpired
Washington Bullets[edit]
- Wikilink double-double for non-basketball readers
Atlanta Hawks[edit]
- "had won at least 50 games the prior three season" - had won at least 50 games in the prior three seasons
- Add a link to Phoenix Suns
Milkawakee Suns[edit]
- "reportedly for a $1.6 million salary in the first season and a $2 million salary" - replaced the emboldened text to wage to avoid reptition
Player profile[edit]
- "and five other times he finished in the top-3." - top three
References[edit]
- References 1, 39, 81 needs the date it was published
- Reference 34 is missing the author who wrote the article and its publication date
- United Press International needs to be added in as the agency for Reference 47
- References 15, 19, 20, 30, 46, 49, 87 & 89 are missing Associated Press as the agency of their respective works
- Reference 76 needs archiving and the date it was published
The prose itself is overall good but some minor issues with it and the references will need addressing before it can have any chance of passing as a GA. MWright96 (talk) 18:55, 4 May 2018 (UTC)