Talk:Montagu Toller

Montagu Toller has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: February 16, 2023. (Reviewed version).

This article was nominated for deletion on 1 May 2022. The result of the discussion was keep.

This page was proposed for deletion by BilledMammal (talk · contribs) on 1 May 2022.

A fact from Montagu Toller appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 March 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Montagu Toller was a part of the British team that played cricket at the 1900 Summer Olympics, the only time cricket was ever featured at the Olympics?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Montagu Toller.

Wikipedia

Olympics

	Olympic Games portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Olympics, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Olympics on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.OlympicsWikipedia:WikiProject OlympicsTemplate:WikiProject OlympicsOlympics articles
???	This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.

Biography: Sports and Games

	Biography portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles
	Sports portal This article is supported by the sports and games work group (assessed as Low-importance).

Cricket: Somerset Low‑importance

This article is part of WikiProject Cricket which aims to expand and organise information better in articles related to the sport of cricket. Please participate by visiting the project and talk pages for more details.CricketWikipedia:WikiProject CricketTemplate:WikiProject Cricketcricket articles

Low

This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

This article is within the scope of the Somerset County Cricket Club task force. For more information, visit the project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the discussion.

WikiProject Cricket To-do list:

Article assessment

Check Category:Unassessed cricket articles for class and Category:Unknown-importance cricket articles for importance: see Assessment Department for details

Verifiability

Update fair and unfair play, fast bowling, first-class cricket, googly, innings, leg break, limited overs cricket, not out, Pakistan Cricket Board, spin bowling, underarm bowling, wicket, and other fundamental articles classified by the WikiProject as high-importance so that they meet WP:Verifiability policy standards

Cleanup

There is a toolserver based WikiProject Cricket cleanup list that automatically updates weekly to show all articles covered by this project which are marked with cleanup tags. (also available in one big list and in CSV format)

Infoboxes

Add infoboxes to the player articles found at Wikipedia:WikiProject Cricket/requested infoboxes

Cricket people

Create articles about 19th century players who are listed in Wikipedia:WikiProject Cricket/19th century players
Create biographies about Bangladeshi players from the task force redlink list
Check the listing of key bios at Wikipedia:WikiProject Cricket/Key biographies and improve these to at least B-class.
Create batting/bowling graphs for cricketers who have excelled in international cricket.
Create articles for redlinks present here and here

Cricket teams & countries

Domestic cricket coverage is needed for Bangladesh, Canada, Kenya, Pakistan, Sri Lanka and Zimbabwe;
Create articles from redlinks and improve existing articles in List of current first-class cricket teams; National cricket teams; Under-19 national cricket teams
Create articles about cricket in these missing countries
Create or expand articles on international tours from items in Wikipedia:WikiProject Cricket/summary of international tour articles
Create a link as such on Template:Cr-Aus/doc for Cricket Australia XI

Images

Add pictures (and remove template from address requests) in these Category:Wikipedia requested images of cricket people
Add pictures for grounds missing photos from here

On this day in cricket

Expand the anniversary coverage for Portal:Cricket at Portal:Cricket/Anniversaries

Umpires

Expand ICC International umpire panel; ICC Elite referee panel; ICC Associates and Affiliates umpire panel

Women

Expand Women's cricket, Women's Test cricket and articles about women's cricket generally especially biographies and tours

Update

A number of lists need to be updated, can be found in Template:International cricketers and Template:National cricket captains
Regularly updating cricketers' career stats.

Other

Export all cricket terms present in List of cricket terms to Wiktionary

GA Review[edit]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Montagu Toller/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 01:01, 15 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I will get to this (hopefully) later today—UTC wise. ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 01:01, 15 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
All done! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns below. Thanks, ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 16:16, 15 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @LunaEatsTuna: All done! Ping! Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 16:33, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - Nice work! Happy now to pass this article for GA status per your changes. Congrats! ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:19, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check[edit]

Earwig says good to go.

File[edit]

The image used is appropriate, of acceptable quality and copyright-free:

File:MH Toller.png: valid public domain rationale.

Prose[edit]

Both counties mentioned are wikilinked in § Life but not in the infobox.
- Linked. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I am sure you have searched extensively, but are there any RS sources on who his mother was?
- Sadly not. Based on Ancestry, I can tell you she was Mary, but even with that information, I haven't been able to find a RS to support it. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 16:16, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - I see. Thanks for trying! ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 16:39, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I would wikilink Brighton as a good chunk of non-English readers are likely to not recognise it.
- Linked. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The sentence starting "He played second-class cricket" is on the longer side. I think "and during the 1895 season" could be split into its own sentence.
- Split and trimmed. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - Looks good.
Add a citation to the efn note.
- Any update?
  - @LunaEatsTuna: Sorry, I did independently remember that I'd missed this! Added now. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 17:04, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - It happens! I happened to be online when you pinged me :)
"By the end of the 1897 season Cricket" – I believe this needs a comma?
- Added. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Refs[edit]

Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 2, 6, 7, 10 or 15. I have access to BNA. Formatting:

The title of ref 9 is missing a space.
- Added. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Other[edit]

Short desc, section formatting, external link and cats good.

Recommend adding WP:ALT text to the image with the alt = parameter.
- Added. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - Nice work!

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 19:36, 22 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

(

Comment or view
Article history

)

... that Montagu Toller was a part of the British team that played Cricket at the 1900 Summer Olympics, the only time cricket was ever featured at the Olypmics? Source: https://www.olympedia.org/lists/102/manual , Berry, Scyld; Booth, Lawrence (2015). The Shorter Wisden 2011 – 2015. London: Bloomsbury Publishing. p. 406. ISBN 978-1-47292-733-0. Page 406 , https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/olympics-1900-320837/france-vs-great-britain-final-320838/full-scorecard
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Maha Thamun

Improved to Good Article status by Harrias (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 21:25, 20 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Montagu Toller; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

Hi Onegreatjoke (talk), review follows; article promoted to GA on 16 February; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing in a spot check on source and Earwig is clear; hook fact is interesting and mentioned in the article, AGF on offline sourcing (though other sources I checked confirm the fact); a QPQ has been carried out. Good to go - Dumelow (talk) 22:16, 20 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]