Talk:Metastatic insulinoma

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Hey Brenda,

Overall I think your wiki looks great!

I would recommend: - Adding the name of your disease at the top of your wiki page. - I think you are missing some sections in your wiki (Prognosis, epidemiology, research directions) - Does this disease have alternate names? - Overall linking more in your wiki page - Looking over your references, especially #9 it looks like something went wrong with the citation.

Let me know if you have questions.

Best, Jackie--Jorozco07 (talk) 22:52, 14 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Brenda,

I did not know this was such a thing, very cool topic! Does it perhaps have another name to it? If so I think including it would be nice. Other than that I was able to flow with everything just fine. Good Luck! -Ivette

--Imunoz02 (talk) 01:48, 16 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Put the term that you are writing about clearly in the first sentence.
You need to add a lot of links to other wikipedia articles.
There are some clarity and grammar issues. I would encourage working with the writing center or a friend to catch some of the specifics.
You are missing some sections of your article.
I appreciate how well-cited this is. When you reuse a citation, however, make sure you just recite it and do not make a whole new citation. Also, do not cite another wikipedia article, just link to it.

Sweiner02 (talk) 23:25, 1 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]