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Neutrality issues[edit]

This article has definite neutrality issues. I have listed all those I find a little dodgy below:

"Mehran Spice & Food Industries is Pakistan’s leading food manufacturer." - Unreferenced

History[edit]

"within a few years the company became one of the leading spice & food industries globally." - Unreferenced and not neutral POV
"equipped with the most advanced rice plant from Germany.[1]" - The reference to this is poorly written and seems (possibly) biased: a second opinion on this would be most welcome.
"Mehran’s Basmati rice is much loved" - reference doesn't actually say it is 'much loved', so why does the article?
"They are a global brand that has presence in more than 50 countries." - Unreferenced

Awards[edit]

"they continue to win hearts with their quality products and economical prices." - not neutral POV

Chairman[edit]

"He believes in providing optimum quality of food." - according to whom?
"by his visionary business skills and compassion for this countrymen." - not neutral POV
"He is a philanthropist by nature and has done tremendous work for the welfare of his native district Thar." - This whole sentence is almost the opposite of neutral POV

These all need to be referenced suitably with reliable sources or changed/removed.

Yours, Gazamp (talk) 18:49, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Neutrality Issues Resolved[edit]

In view of the above mentioned issues, several changes have been made which are mentioned below after '||'

"Mehran Spice & Food Industries is Pakistan’s leading food manufacturer." - Unreferenced || has been removed

History[edit]

"within a few years the company became one of the leading spice & food industries globally." - Unreferenced and not neutral POV || has been removed
"equipped with the most advanced rice plant from Germany.[2]" - The reference to this is poorly written and seems (possibly) biased: a second opinion on this would be most welcome. || it is not biased. However, it has been made neutral.
"Mehran’s Basmati rice is much loved" - reference doesn't actually say it is 'much loved', so why does the article? || has been edited
"They are a global brand that has presence in more than 50 countries." - Unreferenced || reference has been added

Awards[edit]

"they continue to win hearts with their quality products and economical prices." - not neutral POV || removed

Chairman[edit]

"He believes in providing optimum quality of food." - according to whom? || removed
"by his visionary business skills and compassion for this countrymen." - not neutral POV || removed
"He is a philanthropist by nature and has done tremendous work for the welfare of his native district Thar." - This whole sentence is almost the opposite of neutral POV || has been removed

Proper link to Chairman Required[edit]

The reference of the chairman of the said company was broken, hence the line removed. Please add a proper reference 103.12.197.230 (talk) 13:15, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]