Talk:Leave It All to Me/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Quite a short article, which I will measure against the GA criteria today. --K. Peake 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Remove venue parameter from the infobox because that is for live recordings
• Separate the labels using bullet points instead
• Target Michael Corcoran to Michael Corcoran (musician)
• Move audio sample to being in the opening section, aligned to the left

Kyle Peake what do you mean by this? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

• "is the debut single by American actress and singer Miranda Cosgrove featuring Drake Bell." → "is a song by American actress and singer Miranda Cosgrove, featuring Drake Bell, from the Nickelodeon show iCarly's soundtrack album of the same name (2008)." with the wikilinks and target – this is because you are supposed to introduce what album(s) a song is on in the first sentence of the lead
• "It was written" → "The song was written"
• Swap the pop song and lead single sentences
• Target theme song to Theme music
• "for the Nickelodeon show iCarly." → "for the show."
• "for soundtrack album of the same name" → "from the album" and maybe mention at the end "standing as Cosgrove's debut release."
• Swap the music video and Hot 100 position for correct order
• Wikilink music video
• "uploaded to Cosgroves" → "uploaded to Cosgrove's"
• "The single debuted and peaked at" → "The song peaked at"
• "giving Cosgrove and Bell" → "giving both Cosgrove and Bell"
• "performed the track during" → "performed "Leave It All to Me" during"
• "her Dancing Crazy Tour in 2011." → "her debut sold tour the Dancing Crazy Tour in 2011."

Background and composition

• "Miranda Cosgrove was asked by" → "Cosgrove was asked by"
• Target theme song to Theme music
• "Cosgrove explained she" → "The singer explained she"
• "or been a recording studio," → "or been in a recording studio,"
• "one of Bell's band members." → "one of Drake Bell's band members."
• "features her former Drake & Josh co-star, Drake Bell." → "features Bell, who co-starred with her in Drake & Josh."
• The source does not mention the song's genre as being pop
• There is no info about the comp apart from the above unsourced genre and literally nothing on the lyrics; can you try and add something?

Release and reception

• Wikilink lead single
• Remove wikilink on soundtrack album
• "iCarly by Nickelodeon Records and Columbia Records." → "iCarly, through Nickelodeon and Columbia Records."
• "list' saying: "the" → "list, saying that "the"
• "giving Cosgrove and Bell" → "giving both Cosgrove and Bell"
• [9] is useless, as that offers no mention of the song's Hot 100 position

Promotion and impact

• Wikilink music video
• "was later released on" → "was later released to"
• "headlining 2011 concert tour" → "headlining 2011 concert tour the"
• "the song at Cosgrove's performance at Club Nokia." → "the song at Club Nokia, with his appearance gathering cheers from the crowd." since this part is mentioned by the source but is missing for some reason
• "it had been six years since Cosgrove released her extended play, High Maintenance," → "it had been around six years since Cosgrove released her second extended play High Maintenance,"
• "In April of the same year," → "In April 2017,"
• "had stated in the past that she" → "revealed that she"
• Target lip-syncing to Lip sync

Credits and personnel

• Good

Charts

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 12.3%; ignore the flagged URL because that is not used anywhere here
• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
• Ref 15 is citing a duplicate URL; use the correct one instead

External links

• Remove this because the music video is linked to from the infobox

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I am not too sure about the article's notability though this will become clearer after your response. --K. Peake 08:37, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Done! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss With the comment about the audio sample, I meant it should be in the background and composition section on the left. Also, you could definitely do with adding a mention of the lyrics to the lead. --K. Peake 10:14, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Kyle Peake added. How does the article look now? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 10:26, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss I copy edited slightly, but it looks good apart from no text on the audio sample detailing the lyrical content; add this since it is sourced in prose, as well as the length of the snippet. --K. Peake 10:30, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Kyle Peake how does it look now? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

✓ Pass, sample text looks good now! --K. Peake 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)