Talk:Killing of John O'Keefe

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New Wiki Page[edit]

Hi,

Thank you for providing feedback and edits to the page! I am working on adding additional context and sources. Including background on the case, pre-trial hearings, prosecution and defense representation and impact coverage. I'd love to chat more about changes on this thread! CBEARWiki (talk) 19:35, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Criminal allegations[edit]

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Thank you! I am editing for clarity and neutrality. A lot of the news coverage leans to either side. Trying to stick to just the facts. This case feels important enough to have a page up to cover the basic information. Appreciate you taking the time to comment! CBEARWiki (talk) 23:49, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm wondering if the page should be moved to "Death of John O'Keefe", until/unless a conviction is secured? ForsythiaJo (talk) 23:58, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That is a great point. I agree. It is not clear if he was killed. "Death of" would be more appropriate. Are you able to change that? I don't know how to. Thanks! CBEARWiki (talk) 00:21, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CBEARWiki and @ForsythiaJo: A "Death of ...." article would imply the died accidentally. I think the fact that police have laid manslaughter charges means they believe it is more probable, than not, that someone is responsible for the death, though it may be negligence, and the death was not accidental. So, I think the word "Killing" is therefore still appropriate, even before conviction. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 01:22, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sources[edit]

Hi there!

I'd like to drawn on your expertise regarding sources. I agree that we want to use the most credible and reliable sources of information for this very sensitive topics.

Couple things I have found and am unsure how to site without using what is being considered "Unreliable sources" --

First is the published recording of the 911 Call where Jen McCabe reports O'Keefe's body -- this is published both on the TBDailyNews Site and was played on CourtTV. I'm not interested in referencing their commentary of the recording but I don'y know how else to site the actual police recording without those links.

Similarly, there are police memos and reports that were submitted to the count and have been published online and on TBDailyNews. In reading the police reports, they include key information of what is being presented; however, I am not clear on how to cite these without linking to the sources that are posting them (again, not taking the individual commentary into account -- only the case documents)

Thoughts? :) CBEARWiki (talk) 00:19, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ForsythiaJo -- You're not being picky at all! Would like your thoughts on how to do this correctly. Thanks! CBEARWiki (talk) 00:20, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, I see what you're saying, that's a good question. My first thought is we need to find these materials elsewhere, but I'm sure you've already looked into that. My second thought is that it's likely these primary sources will be brought up, or at least discussed, during the trial this spring. It's possible we may need to wait until then to have a reliable source to cite. Sorry this probably isn't much help! ForsythiaJo (talk) 00:30, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All good points! They have already been presented in pre-trial hearings, so I would assume there must be some other coverage of the case.

You're right, my initial searches did not come up with anything but I'll keep looking. I'll continue the hunt for some reliable sources. Thanks for weighing in! CBEARWiki (talk) 00:38, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Trial section[edit]

The trial is ongoing and already has a lot of information. I wonder how we can better organize the section. I have two ideas and please let me know what you think: 1. Organize by groups of people who testified: Family and friends, first responders (police, firefighters and paramedics), and those who are at the party. This would help put things into perspective, but it would not be in a chronological order. 2. Follow a chronological order. Who came first to testify comes first in the text, which is what we are currently doing on this page. However, it looks a little messy. Mikiko609 (talk) 19:43, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Organized as of May 21.

Also want to add a chart showing the relationships between the Alberts and the McCabes as there are many of them who testified. Lastly, the trial is getting very redundant and I am not sure how much detail we will end up keeping. Mikiko609 (talk) 00:37, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]