Talk:Jerash Cathedral

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Added a citation to point to the picture of Jerash (Gerasa) ^[1] Added a citation within Bibliography for Jerash (Gerasa) ^[2] Crowlady1957 (talk) 02:14, 15 October 2018 (UTC) Added a citation to the article Babylonian Architecture^[3][reply]

Feedback from Prof McClanan[edit]

Please revise this from notes into a full draft that reads like other Wikipedia entries by 11/29, and email me when it's up. I'm happy to meet with you this week if you have any questions! AMcClanan (talk) 19:35, 25 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Article Review[edit]

You have a lot of content which is great. I think your next step is to transition your work to make it look like a true Wikipedia article. There are some really easy templets on how to create titles and such under the help tab while you are editing. I also think it would be wise to add some photos so that your reader will know exactly what it is you are talking about. I am excited to read the full article when it is complete and published. GWeinert2 (talk) 17:36, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback from Prof McClanan[edit]

Thanks for your work on this draft, you're making great progress. Here are a few considerations as you revise:

Although for a paper you'd want to give general context on Jerash, remember that in Wikipedia you just link to the general Jerash article instead of giving the short overview currently in the draft. That said, it's typical for a Wikipedia entry to have an opening sentence or two the overviews the entry's topic, so for you you'd recap a key observation or two about the basilica.
the section labelled Cathedral is mostly about material at Jerash besides the cathedral so hone in more there on your topic please. Similarly the next section doesn't have that much about the cathedral either
stick with peer-reviewed sources so the film should be omitted, and maybe add something in its place? The other sources look very useful though.

Please touch base if I can help in any way!

AMcClanan (talk) 20:03, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

From Prof McClanan, 12/7[edit]

There is still a lot of content that isn't about the specific topic of your entry. If you revise this more by 12/9 please email me and I'll update your grade. Thanks!

AMcClanan (talk) 19:33, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

^ https://www.loc.gov/resource/matpc.02752/
^ https://www.loc.gov/resource/matpc.02752/
^ Musílek, Josef; Podolka, Luboš; Karková, Monika (2016). "The Unique Construction of the Church of Hagia Irene in Istanbul for The Teaching of Byzantine Architecture". Procedia Engineering. 161: 1745–1750. doi:10.1016/j.proeng.2016.08.770. ISSN 1877-7058 – via Elsevier Science Direct Journals. Crowlady1957 (talk) 02:14, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

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[3] Musílek, Josef; Podolka, Luboš; Karková, Monika (2016). "The Unique Construction of the Church of Hagia Irene in Istanbul for The Teaching of Byzantine Architecture". Procedia Engineering. 161: 1745–1750. doi:10.1016/j.proeng.2016.08.770. ISSN 1877-7058 – via Elsevier Science Direct Journals. Crowlady1957 (talk) 02:14, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

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