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Review: March 9, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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Did you know... that in July 1918, Jagdgeschwader III faced the problem of self-igniting ammunition?

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.b Y
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2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (14.5% is highest, due to incidental parallels.)
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3.b Y
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6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions[edit]

Lede[edit]

and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of three attacking Armees. suggest you change this to and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of the three Armees involved in the attack.
- Excellent suggestion. Slight rewrite.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
not to mention frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals, suggest along with frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals,
- Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Operational history[edit]

Flying was kept to a bare minimum. JG III husbanded its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive. suggest Flying was kept to a bare minimum, as JG III was husbanding its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive.** Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Georgejdorner: That is all of my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:51, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Many thanks for a speedy review.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]