Talk:HMS Savage (G20)

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:57, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "town of Burton on Trent" Burton-on-Trent or Burton upon Trent.

Done.

• Is there a link for "adopted"?

Unfortunately not.

• "new 4.5 inches" should be adj=on

Done.

• " the QF Mk III forward and two single QF Mk IV " these two link to the same article.

Duplicate removed.

• "Operations Camera and Operation Governor" links?

Unfortunately not. I have replaced this with a bit more context.

• "from Gibraltar to Scapa Flow" links?

Done.

• "the Battle of North Cape" _the_ North Cape.

Done.

• "purchased in the Flotilla and" not the full formal name so just "flotilla" suffices.

Done.

• "615 tons of oil" avoid starting sentences with nuermals.

Reworded.

• "new 4.5 inches (114 mm" see above.

Done.

• "twin QF Mk III mounted forward and two single QF Mk IV mounted" likewise.

Done.

• "Hazemeyer mounts" what are they? Link?

Added link.

• "Newcastle upon Tyne on " comma after Tyne.

Done.

• "town of Burton on Trent" see above.

Done.

• Operation Camera/Governor links?

Unfortunately not.

• Link Gibraltar and Scarpa Flow.

Done.

• Wartime service table could use a caption and row/col scopes per MOS:DTT for screen readers etc.

Done.

• "Battle of North Cape" section and links, its "Battle of the North Cape".

Done.

• "December the Admiralty signalled" overlinked.

Removed.

• "cruisers HMS Belfast and" linked to a redirect.

Fixed.

• "radar directed" hyphenate.

Done.

• "star shells" what are they?

Added wikilink.

• Link Portsmouth/Chatham, I imagine you are referring to the docks there, rather than the towns.

Yes. Added wikilinks

• "Tirpitz, 1942-1944" en-dash.

Done.

• "Disarmament, 1942-1947" en-dash.

Done.

That's all for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:20, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for a comprehensive review. I have made amendments. Please take another look. simongraham (talk) 20:30, 3 September 2021 (UTC)