Talk:Funeral Blues/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:59, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Lede

• Commas around "or "Stop all the clocks""
  • Added
• Combine first two sentences for flow**
  • Added

Writing and publication

• Link verse play
• "in his book" → "in his poetry collection"
  • Done both

Analysis

• Is there a synonym for unnecessarily corrupted rhyme that might be understood by those less versed in poetic criticism?
  • tried to rephrase
• ""momentarily distracted by grief."" → ""momentarily distracted by grief"." per MOS:LQ
  • Done

Appearances and reception

• What year was the Faber and Faber collection published?
• Remove the birth and death dates on Palmer per MOS:BIRTHDATE, which states birth and death details should only be included after a name if there is special contextual relevance
  • Done

References

• Mixed use of access date, sometimes DMY, sometimes YYYY--MM-DD
  • Should be standardized Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 19:25, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

General comments

• No images used, so criteria do not need to be addressed
• No stability concerns in the revision history
• Earwig score looks good

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 16:32, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

thanks, GhostRiver, how does this look now? Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 19:25, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for making those changes. Everything looks good from my end, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 22:33, 19 January 2022 (UTC)