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The article is well sourced and all sources are reputable. The first sentence isn't very clear, such as why are they selling livestock when they don't have enough food? Give some more context to the percentages, 25% or 12% in relation to what? The current information doesn't tie in too well, add some sentences to bridge the gap between each sentence of information. Tying in how climate change drives problems in the global south is a great point and one I will also use in my article about gender equality in Zimbabwe.
Solid points. I have already made some very minor adjustments after reading your inputs. I will see if I can restructure my paragraph in a more fluent way to make sure that the article follows some sort of order. I will include more sources which should help me develop my article as well. Thanks for the suggestions.
