I'd spell out millimeter in the WP:LEAD to make it more accessible
See WP:REFSPACE examples for where exactly to place the reference
That's it for now I hope to have more comments later
If you found my comments helpful, I suggest you help someone else do something sometime. =) Biosthmors (talk) 22:04, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
From Scray
Urge reworking of "Procedure" section to a text description rather than a "how to". -- Scray (talk) 14:35, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Subsequent edits did not reflect this suggestion, so I've introduced a few changes to give a sense of what I've suggested. Happy to discuss here. -- Scray (talk) 17:58, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the help, The edits I made were based of of the way the procedure overview was written in this entry. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SurgeryJgore3—Preceding undated comment added 18:07, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]