Talk:Digital on-screen graphic/Archives/2013
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Sentence needs to be re-written
"So buying this subscription adds a pint glass graphic to the bottom of the screen for inspectors to see, furthermore the graphic changes at certain times which the inspector is only in knowledge of when this change will occur."
Good grief! Who wrote this sentence? It's both a fragment and a run-on! I have some ideas about how to fix it. Let me suggest this:
- Buying this subscription adds a pint-glass graphic to the bottom of the screen for inspectors to see. The graphic changes at certain times, and only the inspectors know when this change is due to occur.
Can anyone else do better? If so, make your own corrections and place them into the article. 108.246.205.134 (talk) 16:34, 24 July 2013 (UTC)