Talk:Critical design

Not sure how to integrate this into article, but Critical Design has plenty of non-primary references, here's a list of articles on the ACM's about it http://dl.acm.org/results.cfm?h=1&cfid=356085245&cftoken=43874335 and Dunne and Raby's Design Noir book has 414 citations in Google Scholar: http://scholar.google.com/scholar?cites=1525576200750282883&as_sdt=20005&sciodt=0,9&hl=en — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.33.31.52 (talk) 14:33, 13 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Critical design is really important, I'm not sure why this is being considered for deletion.

Critical Design is the "Doing Business As" name of my planning consultancy in Quincy, Massachusetts since 1995. (Kevindye (talk) 16:52, 14 September 2011 (UTC))[reply]

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Suggestion for revision[edit]

It seems redundant to me to say "Its opposite is affirmative design." again in the third history paragraph after this was just stated. I think it might be better just to remove this second instance unless it is expanded and tied into its surrounding context better. Jrquant (talk) 22:53, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I second the revision suggestion as the article does not answer what “critical design” is. It doesn’t even explain what significance “critical” would have (notably, it could be read as “critical” in a sense of analysis, or “critical” in a sense of importance). Interestingly, the entry on speculative design is clearer, particularly the “A/B Manifesto” section. — j9t (talk) 15:28, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Function section is confusing[edit]

I'm not from the design world, but I find the section Function quite confusing. Part of the problem is how the section is written, with many indefinite referents (it, this), part of the problem is that statements are made that don't seem to have a resolution, and part of the problem may be that sentences of 50+ words make it hard to connect the ideas from one sentence to the next.

For example, the first sentence says "critical design broadens the vision in design from traditional practice" but the second sentence states "how Modernism leaves a narrower understanding of physical utility". I think these two sentences attempt to show why there is some ambiguity about critical design's relationship with function, but I'm not clear if "function" refers to critical design's own function in the design process, or critical design's role in considering the function of the things being designed.

The second sentence states that Matt Malpass wrote an article about five Big Concepts in Larry Ligo's book, but I'm not sure that any of those concepts, or a mention of Larry Ligo's book, is relevant. I think there is an implicit connection between Modernism and Critical Design, but as Modernism is mentioned nowhere else in this article, it is impossible for a reader to understand why "Modernism['s] narrower understanding of physical utility when we think about function" would "lead[] to the ambiguity in Critical Design's function".

Also I'm having a hard time understanding the final sentence of the first paragraph and how it connects to the precding sentence. "It mostly emphasizes on social and cultural impact from its function". "on" and "from" don't seem like the right prepositions. I'm not sure if it would be correct to rewrite it as "Critical design emphasizes social and cultural impact instead of function.", but if that would be correct, perhaps it should be the first sentence of the entire section instead of the last?

Dan Scott (talk) 19:18, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]