Talk:Carignan-Salières Regiment

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Lack of succinctness[edit]

According to Wikipedia's Manual of Style "editors should write articles using straightforward, succinct, easily understood language and structure articles with consistent, reader-friendly layouts and formatting." This article is fairly accurate, but does suffer from a lack of succinctness. This is especially true with the section Crisis in New France. Doubtful that almost 1000 words are needed to explain why the Carignan-Salières Regiment was sent to the colony in 1665. Due to the age of the article many of the citations link to sources that are no longer available.

Currently copy editing, fact-checking and updating citations. Griffin's Sword (talk) 19:52, 26 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lead, Formation, and Crisis in New France have been updated. Some non-essential details have been deleted especially in cases when the information was not supported by the cited source. Griffin's Sword (talk) 18:44, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]