Talk:Brad Davison
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:12, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you. I will try to review one of your nominations. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 15:53, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
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- It is stable.
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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High school career[edit]
- Wikilink football to American football and quarterback to its own article
- "He played quarterback on the football field" - the text in bold can be changed to say He played as a quarterback or He played in the quarterback position
- Wikilink the first mention of the term yards to Yards (gridiron football
- Wikilink touchdown to those unfamiliar with American football
- "in leading Maple Grove to a 25–5 record and state tournament berth." - and a state
- "Davison earned a spot on USA Today's Minnesota All-State Team after averaged 24.4 points," - the text highlighted in bold can be changed to say averaging
- Wikilink the terms points, rebounds, assists and steals to their respective articles to help those not familiar with basketball
- USA Today should be wikilinked on its first mention
- "He was ranked No. 119 recruit in his class by Rivals.com" - ranked the No. 119
- Also, No. could do with the template added to it to explain that it means number
- "and committed to Wisconsin on July 11, 2016, " - and committed to playing college basketball for Wisconsin
College career[edit]
- Wikilink free throw line to Free throw]
- "and making a team-high 60 times from 3-point range." - from the three-point range
- Three point range would benefit from being linked to the article Three-point field goal
- "resulting in successful offseason shoulder surgery." - you can say it was the left shoulder that underwent surgery per Wisconsin State Journal source that cites the sentence this portion of text is in
- "and finished with a 15-18 record, " - the hyphen should be replaced by an en dash per MOS:DASH
- "which ranked them 9th in the Big Ten." - I feel like there are some words that are missing from the end of this sentence
- "Davison also received attention for perceived flopping, and the NCAA rule to combat flopping was informally called "the Brad Davison rule."" - repetition of the term "flopping"
- "Davison shot 3-of-20" - en dashes in place of hyphens please
- "Davison was suspended one game by the Big Ten for a flagrant foul he committed the previous game " - try not to use neutral wording to replace the word highlighted in bold
Personal life[edit]
- "who both of played" - can be either worded to say who both played or both of whom played
- Wikilink National Football Foundation, National Honor Society and Fellowship of Christian Athletes
- "Davison has participated in over 120 hours of volunteer work," - more than
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:03, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
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