Talk:Bess Truman/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:47, 1 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:47, 1 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The license and source info for File:Elizabeth Truman.png need to be fixed
All other images properly licensed
no historical consensus Makes no sense, rephrase to something along the lines: "There is no consensus by historians..." or somesuch.
if Gates Mansion is the name of her grandparents' house, say so
Bess also managed household affairs, including finances and child rearing Child rearing is essentially redundant to the bit about Bess being the authority figure in Margaret's life.
When I see "long gown" I think about ball gowns, etc. Rephrase and clarify
first lady social secretary awkward, replace first lady with "her"
destroyed many of her own correspondences Correspondences? Try letters, documents, etc.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:31, 26 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
All of these issues have been addressed. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 21:34, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]