Talk:Babu Chotelal Shrivastava

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Feedback from New Page Review process[edit]

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Good start.

The "external links" would make good references.

The term "Jungle" in "Jungle Satyagraha" is confusing. While Satyagraha is mentioned a lot in the references, I can't see where "jungle" is. Possibly a translation error?

North8000 (talk) 13:51, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral point of view?[edit]

Hello! It appears that this page is not neutral, as it calls the British Raj "tyrannical". Albeit the Raj did lots of bad to India in my opinion, Wikipedia is based on a neutral point of view and thus needs to talk about the Raj in a way that does not show the Raj in a negative or positive light, rather a neutral light. In order to do this, you can say something like "Babu protested against the British Raj because he did not agree with what they were doing to people." Thank you! Capsulecap (talk) 15:03, 29 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Naming[edit]

Wikipedia very, very heavily discourages the use of titles of any kind, with very rare exceptions. I am thinking that the subject should be called Shrivastava except in mentions that need a full name. Some of the name uses in here either refer to him in ways that I am not understanding, or seem to be bordering on references to other people that border on coatracking.John Pack Lambert (talk) 13:51, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]