Talk:Ayame Mizushima

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Wikiedu comments[edit]

→ Good article. Because you took the time to write in Romanji some titles, I would be consistent and do the same for the published work section if possible. The last sentence in 'early life' seems weird to me : suffers how? I think it would be a good idea to give more details about it or to leave it out because as it is now it gives me the impression that she died of it. In the end, I feel that you have a good format and the text flows really well. Good job! Mturta (talk) 21:08, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Anne-MarieDesjardins. Peer reviewers: BeeHime, Mturta.

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Peer Review BeeHime[edit]

(I already posted these comments on your username Talk page :) ) Hi Anne-MarieDesjardins! I really like your article, the general Biography and Early Life information is clear, well written, and neutral. The only thing that I would change is to add the English translation, or at least write the title in romaji, in the Published Work section for the users who can't read hiraganas and kanjis. Unfortunately, my knowledge of Japanese is limited to hiraganas, and so I couldn't check two of the websites' content. I will try to look for some sources of information in the next weeks, in case I come across additional details while doing my own research. BeeHime (talk) 18:10, 26 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]