Talk:Astrith Baltsan
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November 2021[edit]
Regarding the tone template, the following are to be noted:
- The career and awards list is essentially a list in prose form, better expression needed. Also, one needs to actually describe her career and not just make a list of awards.
- The tone is more of a one usually employed on a personal website or other such things, is not quite promotional, but quasi-promotional-like. Needs to improve, a lot. Made some edits in this regard. MxWondrous (talk) 13:06, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
- Hey. I stumbled upon this article. I saw the templates and naturally wanted to improve this article so they can be gone--but after reading the article, I'm sturggling to understand the problem with it.
- Although the career segment is quite boastful, it's factually correct and in my opinion fitting.
- Can you explain more specifically what needs to be changed? I'm quite keen to improve this article and would like some explanation on what work needs to be done.
- Thanks. AvivBn263 (talk) 17:08, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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