Talk:Asisguard Songar

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Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:33, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 12:10, 21 April 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I assume good faith on the non-English references. The hook fact needs a direct citation right after the sentence containing the hook fact. SL93 (talk) 16:36, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • @SL93: Thank you very much for your review. I added the missing citation. I hope it was the only issue and was addressed correctly. CeeGee 04:23, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • I approved it. I also placed a space between 40 and mm in the hook per the article. SL93 (talk) 11:52, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@CeeGee and SL93: I was going to promote this, but I was concerned about the hook. The hook says that it was outfitted with "a 40 mm mini missile" which implies one missle, but the article says, "The drone can fire up six mini missiles". Should the hook be changed to say, "integrated with 40 mm mini missiles" or something similar? If so, can you formally propose and approve an ALT below with the modified wording? Thanks Z1720 (talk) 02:03, 11 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Z1720: Thank you. You are correct. It must have escaped my attention. ALT1 follows. @SL93: Would you please recheck ALT1 for completeness?. CeeGee 06:30, 11 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]