Talk:Andrew Ross (rugby union, born 1879)

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Did you know... that the Scottish international rugby player Andrew Ross joined the Canadian Expeditionary Force at the start of World War One?

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wugapodes (talk · contribs) 14:44, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Wugapodes [t^hɔk] [kantʃɻɪbz] 14:44, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist[edit]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
See WP:PEACOCK
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Cites reliable sources, where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
See WP:PEACOCK
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
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Comments[edit]

If the comment is numbered, it must be addressed for the article to pass, if it is bulleted, it's an optional suggestion or comment that you don't need to act on right now.
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"He had an adventurous life..." too editorialized. Reword to be more neutral and encyclopedic
Done. FunkyCanute (talk) 09:55, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The block quote on his death reads as rather non-neutral since it contains almost entirely praise which doesn't add much information.
Removed. FunkyCanute (talk) 09:55, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You might want to wikilink "solicitor" in the lead. I don't know what it is, and solicitor is a dab page.

I have linked to Solicitor (not a dab page).

The Action at St Eloi Craters section seems to be almost entirely quotes. I would recommend rewriting it to use original prose. See WP:OVERQUOTE.

After removing the quote from the CO, the balance, I think, is restored.

Results[edit]

On Hold for 7 days. Very close! Just a few more edits. Wugapodes [t^hɔk] [kantʃɻɪbz] 19:55, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I think that's everything cleared up. Many thanks for the review, Wugapodes. FunkyCanute (talk) 09:57, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Promoted Very good work! Wugapodes [t^hɔk] [kantʃɻɪbz] 01:14, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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